Hey-
The Episodes page has been updated with all of the finale.
I wanted to throw out something I’d been thinking about. I just read Episode 13 for shits and giggles, and noticed three things. First, the writing was erratic, there were parts I loved, and others that seemly didn’t flow (in addition to some typos.) So to all the readers who suffered through that during the comic, fear not, the next series will be much better in that way. (Less work, more time spent on writing.) I’m going to try and see how great I can make this next one. Solid writing, great filming, more photoshop.
Second thing was this: several times during the series, I found that there were battle scenes for no reason at all, just so that the character’s could furhter develop “just how bad things were going for them.” Not necessary. So expect less extraneous material in the next series.
Third: Disk, Horizon, and Gunner, were all the same character. Though they had different backgrounds, the end of the series saw them all reacting and acting in the same way. Their monologues were similar as well. That isn’t to say that what they said was uninteresting, I wholeheartedly disagree. I like what I wrote for the most part, what I am saying is that, in an effort to avoid stereotypes, I constructed each character in a similar vein. Expect more unique ones in the next series.
If you agree or disagree with any of that feel free to comment. I like cutting up my work once I finish a project. Keeps my head small, and lets me better understand how to improve.
Peace,
Susskind
